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The Burned Man

Writer: Nik Gomez
Nik Gomez
4 days ago
13 min read

I can feel the chilled air’s harsh embrace on my skin as the port door closes. Four levels underground, Cold Room 6 doesn’t disappoint. My body reacts instantly upon entering the temperature-controlled environment set at 34 degrees Fahrenheit, moisture beading along the concrete walls. I check off each observation in my head, the same way I once catalogued gunshot wounds and blunt trauma, while the massive refrigeration system hums softly in the corner. A sturdy metal examination table stands in the center of the room, where Specimen Echo-Seven is secured to a restraining board with wooden stakes through its flesh.

“The Extraction went as planned.” The escorting officer, tired-eyed beneath his tactical helmet, visibly tenses. “Target was recovered after a failed incineration attempt.”

I slowly step toward the examination table, my reflection ghosting faintly across the steel—plain, unremarkable, dressed to disappear into rooms like this one. The documentation describes an almost unrecognizable human form with flesh charred to resemble an overcooked steak. Skin, where it hasn’t bubbled away, is almost entirely black. Underneath it, something resembling muscle peeks through. Bloodless, but… healthier looking than the surrounding skin. The rib cage has partially caved in, causing bones to stick out at distorted angles through discolored tissue. The most disturbing feature is its face, which melted under intense heat and then reformed into a shape no longer human.

“Approximate time of apprehension?” I ask.

“Zero-three-twenty hours. The subject was found unresponsive in the transit tunnels beneath the northeast section.” The officer shifts from foot to foot. His eyes glance toward the table but rarely stay fixed on it for more than a few seconds at a time. “Techs estimate burn damage at eighty-seven percent of the body… he shouldn’t have survived.”

I circle the examination table, studying the restraint system. The smell hits differently up close—not the char I expected, but something underneath it, faintly sweet, like meat left too long in a warm room despite the cold. Six wooden stakes, not nails. One through each upper arm. One through each thigh. One through the upper abdomen. The last pierces the left pectoral muscle, angled clear of the heart. Wire cages lock each wrist and ankle to the table frame—a second layer, in case the wood alone isn’t enough. Symmetrical. Precise enough to immobilize without piercing anything immediately vital.

“And… incineration attempt was protocol?”

The officer nods. “Affirmative. Standard procedure. But the fire suppression was activated before completion.” He glances down at his wrist. “Please give a verbal receipt of transfer.”

I can tell the officer wants to leave. “Custody transferred. Acknowledged and accepted.” I sign my name on the electronic pad the officer holds. “Dismissed.”

The officer’s face shows relief, then discipline. Professionalism. Good—the kind you learn by refusing to ask what happens after you sign the transfer sheet. He gives one sharp nod and turns toward the door.

“Officer,” I call after him. “Subject viable?”

The officer stops, half-turned back into the room. “Shouldn’t be alive,” he says in a low voice. “Much less viable. But I wouldn’t turn my back on it.” The door clicks shut with another hiss behind him, and I’m left alone with the specimen.

Protocol calls for immediate instrumentation. Sensors for heart rate, lung function, and brain activity. All have to be applied by hand where skin meets skin. Blackened skin, but skin nonetheless. I work quickly and efficiently, calibrating each device once it beeps to life. The small screens light up the room with a blue glow bouncing off the thick moisture hanging in the air. Heart rate is weak, but present. Expected. Lung capacity is registering at seven percent of normal human function. Brain activity flat but discernible.

I pull up a chair at arm’s length, per the guidelines… which I’ve never once had reason to question. Optimal observation distance, minimal reaction time. As if you could run from Cold Room 6. Environment-proof walls. Separate oxygen supply, shutdown in seconds. I’ve sat in this chair a dozen times before. It has never once felt like the dangerous side of the room. Four minutes of observation. Long enough for certainty to settle… until it doesn’t.

Specimen Echo-Seven’s lung capacity has increased. Just a hair. But not enough to register outside standard margins of error. Seven percent. Now seven-point-three percent. I note the change in a ledger but keep writing. Subject appears burned beyond life. Its skin blends into the charcoal beneath it, blackest where the restraints have cut into its flesh.

Twenty-two minutes in, it moves. The chest, barely rising a moment ago, rises now with more force than the lung sensor’s readings had led me to expect. I look up from my notes, hand paused midair, and watch it expand and contract.

I rise to my feet and step closer, positioning the chair between myself and the specimen. I can’t help but notice new abnormalities from this lateral vantage. The skin isn’t burned—at least not across the entirety of the specimen’s body. Where the restraints had cut in, the skin isn’t charred. It’s healing… like thick scabs.

The monitor tracking neural activity gives a soft tone as readings steadily shift upward, chaos giving way to something more structured. I take another step closer and keep my breathing even. Protocol dictates immediate reporting of unexpected subject animation, but confirmation is required first. False alarms are unacceptable.

The specimen’s burned hand twitches. Charcoal fingertips scraped down to tendon. Another twitch. Barely perceptible movement of the index finger, but intentional. I watch impassively, as if analyzing cell mitosis rather than witnessing a dead thing coming back to life.

I lean in further to get a better look. Close up, I can see things I couldn’t at arm’s length… and smell them too. That faint sweetness from before has sharpened, gone almost floral, wrong in a way I can’t name. There’s no sign of swelling or rejection around the stakes pinning the specimen’s arms to the restraining board. Where they touch, its skin looks like it’s trying to absorb the wood. Skin at the contact point is nearly black. Wooden stakes show hairline fractures as well. I take meticulous notes. Whatever empathy stirs, I lock it away. Data. That’s all this is.

The face of the specimen doesn’t move. Flesh burned away, features melted, one eye socket hollow, teeth missing from a clenched jaw. Then… a flinch. I just barely catch it, note it, and verify my initial observation.

The eyelid of the corpse twitches. I thought the eyelid had sealed permanently due to the burns, yet it moves and opens. The movement is nearly imperceptible at first but gradually becomes more pronounced.

White. The eye reveals white—gray iris and pupil obscured by opacity, but not blindness. Watching me.

My pen comes to a halt. Across the room, only the low buzz of cold storage cabinets remains. Staring. I lock eyes across the sterile emptiness of Cold Room 6.

And then the burned lips part. The remaining flesh stretches across broken teeth, threatening to split with every twitch of pale skin. Nothing wet or gulping comes from the corpse’s throat, but a voice speaks with crystalline clarity across the expanse of the room.

“Cold.”

I blink but remain motionless. Somewhere beneath layers of training and professional detachment, something older tells me not to move.

I slide my recorder across the table, thumb pressing the power button as I maintain eye contact. “Recording initiated—interview procedure 7-9-3. Subject: Echo-Seven is awake and responsive.” It marks the first time I’ve encountered a responsive specimen in this condition. The report can wait until I have something worth reporting.

I dim the lights hanging from the ceiling by thirty percent to maintain visibility without causing discomfort to exposed skin. A kindness I give to those who remain awake. “You have been named Specimen Echo-Seven.” The burned mouth curls at that—amusement, maybe, at the harmlessness of it. I sit back down in the chair. “Do you know where you are?”

The burned skull tilts toward me. Wooden restraints creak as the one good eye stares into me with milky white depth. “Cold room.” The voice is clearer than before, higher-pitched than expected from his scorched throat. “Number six.” Silence. “I can hear the water droplets hitting the walls. Seven hundred and twelve since I got here.”

I document the subject’s orientation and sense of time. “How long have you been awake?”

“Before. While. After.” The scorched mouth twists. A smile, if you’re generous—new teeth shining through gaps, too white against the black.

“You were burned.” I watch the specimen closely for reaction to this information. “Describe what occurred.”

The specimen’s chest heaves subtly, drawing in a lungful of deeper air than before, pushing the wooden stake through it several millimeters. “Fire. Then more fire. And then… something moved. Like a door being unlocked. They thought fire would undo me. They stopped too soon. Left enough alive to rebuild.”

My pen keeps moving. “And prior to burning? Tell me about your past.”

“My history.” He repeats the syllables as if trying them on for size. “Darkness. Underground. Iron shifting. People above that never see.” Somewhere behind me, the refrigeration unit cycles, laboring a half-note lower than it had ten minutes ago. His head tilts to the side, showering a fine dusting of ash across the examination table. “Forests. Ancient trees. Ground thick with the ancestors.”

“How long have you been alive?” I frame the question carefully.

His reply is a noise between a chuckle and a sigh. “Time is irrelevant. I’ve walked while nations fell. Slept while others were built. Been burned before. Pinned with wood. Sealed in silver. Buried beneath stone.” His clouded eye shifts toward me. “Silver did nothing. Stone only delayed me.”

“Are there more of you?”

The inquiry draws a stronger response. The detainee’s muscles stiffen against his restraints as the bio-monitor beeps and his brainwave activity spikes. “There are others,” he repeats. “Yes. Roaming through tunnels beyond your prison. Beneath your roads.” I can feel the eye boring into me with startling intensity. “Some know names. Some forget. I remember.”

“And your name is?” I lock eyes with the subject even as I feel the bile rise in my throat.

His mouth reveals more teeth than a jaw should hold, perfectly aligned against the blackened flesh. They form a terrible grin. “Names are dangerous things,” he replies.

The only question tonight he’s refused outright. Everything else, he’s given freely. “Tell me how you managed to survive the attempt to burn you.”

“Just waiting,” the creature replies. “Fire requires oxygen. Flesh requires blood flow. I withheld one and took the other.” He hesitates. “They opened the container to verify death. Saw ash where a human would be. Didn’t look long enough to notice movement in the ash.”

The heart rate monitor emits a quiet beep. Forty-two beats per minute now, up from thirty-eight when the interview began—already well above the documented resting range for an infected host. Statistically significant.

“I know what you want to ask.” The creature’s grotesque face twists into something passing for a smirk. “Questions about feeding. About transmission. About whether we crave blood or there’s something else in it we want. Don’t you want to experience that revelation on your own? Firsthand information is always so much more... personal.”

I keep my voice professional, though I’ve noticed a metallic taste at the back of my throat that has nothing to do with the room’s air filtration. “I don’t care about stories or predictions. Only facts.” It isn’t entirely true anymore, and some detached part of me notes that too.

His head dips once. “Fact: wood driven through flesh disrupts the symbiont’s neural pathways. Through the heart, it stops everything. Elsewhere, it only slows us. You learned that.” He nods slightly toward the stakes piercing his arms and legs. “Fact: cold inhibits regeneration but doesn’t stop it. Fact: isolation slows recovery. Interaction accelerates it.” No threat hands over its weaknesses without a reason. I file the thought away and press forward.

“Observation?” I ask.

“Watching you. Listening. Remembering.” His eye tracks my pen. “You’ve been observing me with questions. Notes.”

“So tell me about the tunnels they found you in,” I continue.

“Veins of your underground cities. Tunnel veins that lead to hubs of illumination.” The words become more mantra-like. “Traveling there is easy. Lining up and waiting is easy. Made a meal of one of them last week. Then another came. Facility maintenance. Followed my trail—breadcrumbs of blood. Saw me. Reached for me.” The optic sensors above the table catch the light. “Nice piece of wood through my shoulder. Smart thinking. Did not see that coming. But eventually the wood splinters.”

I process this information against recent incident reports. A maintenance worker in the metro system had reported an encounter with an unidentified hostile entity. Reports had been dismissed as “stress-induced hallucination”—until Echo-Seven’s capture provided correlation.

“So the worker survived,” I note, watching for reaction.

“For now,” the subject answers. “I smell him. I have his blood.” His mutilated hand tightens against the wire cage. “If I don’t finish him, others will. We have similar… ideas.” Condensation lets go of the ceiling above the table, landing on charred skin with a hiss too small to be real.

Spider cracks deepen across the wooden restraints. The bruising around each stake darkens, spreading outward through the charred tissue.

“You’re mending yourself,” I say flatly. My next breath leaves no fog. The wall display reads thirty-six degrees and rising. I record the change without mentioning it.

“Yes,” Echo-Seven acknowledges. “The wood impedes. The cold delays. But this conversation accelerates. Thought stimulates restoration. Cognition feeds function.”

“Then perhaps we should conclude this interview.” I reach for the recording device.

“Before you do...” His voice softens, becoming almost conversational. “I have a question of my own.” His eye rolls upward, toward the ceiling. “Are there many people above us?”

There’s a silence. “Interview terminated.” I press the REC button off with my thumb. The eye stares at me unwaveringly, waiting. His grin is still intact.

Protocol says I stand up and walk out. Instead, I press the silent security alert beneath the table and watch its indicator flash once. Echo-Seven has confirmed that our containment protocols are incomplete and that others may be active. If conversation accelerates his recovery, every remaining question has to buy information worth the risk.

I turn the recorder back on. “Interview reconvened. Note: Subject demonstrates awareness of the interview’s stimulative effect on physical recovery. Proceeding under emergency containment protocol.”

“Wise decision,” the subject says before I can form the next question. “Curiosity outweighs caution. It always does.” I don’t like how easily he’s right.

I observe a change in the texture of the blackened tissue along the subject’s forearms. What had been brittle and flaking now appears more cohesive, with a subtle sheen like cooling obsidian. The transformation is localized but spreading outward from the areas surrounding the wooden restraints.

“What destroys your kind? Not slows. Destroys.”

“Destroys?” He seems to consider this. “The heart stake holds only as long as it stays in. Someone always pulls it out. Fire...” The ruined mouth forms what might be a grimace. “Fire, finished properly. Nothing regenerates when there’s nothing living left.”

Total incineration would take considerable energy and a great deal more containment than Cold Room 6 offers.

“Your physiology suggests adaptive properties,” I observe, watching as the subject’s chest expands in a more definitive breathing pattern than before. “How quickly do you typically regenerate from injuries?”

“Depends on the stimulus.” His fingers curl deliberately, testing their range of motion against the restraints. “Pain... pain wakes things up faster. If there’s enough left to wake. Your predecessor knew this. Used pain. Didn’t work how he hoped.”

My predecessor. Echo-One through Six are listed as closed cases, their files sealed above my clearance. I’ve never had reason to question that either. “Those cases are closed.”

“Closed,” he repeats, amusement threading through his voice. “Not gone. Your predecessor worked on every one. The original files might be illuminating… if they haven’t been purged.”

The heart rate monitor shows sixty-four BPM now, nearly triple the expected resting pulse of an infected host and crossing into the human range. Respiratory capacity reaches twenty-three percent of normal human function. More concerning are the physical changes now visible. The tissue along the subject’s torso darkens from charred gray-black to a deeper, almost liquid-looking black that seems to absorb light rather than reflect it. Muscle definition is becoming more pronounced beneath the damaged skin, particularly around the shoulders and neck. “Why did you allow yourself to be captured?” The question forms as much from emerging suspicion as from protocol.

“Perceptive. Yes—allowed is the correct word.” He studies me through his clouded eye. “Consider it reconnaissance. I wanted to learn what you know. What you don’t.”

I keep my expression neutral while recalculating the threat. If he entered willingly, containment failed before he ever reached the table. “And what have you learned?”

“That your containment is inadequate. That your understanding is fragmentary. That you believe observation equals control.”

Something subtle catches my eye. The wood stake that had been jammed into the subject’s right thigh now has a crack running the full length of it, wide enough to catch the light. It’s close to breaking—the wood has been stressed past its limits… the bindings are weakening.

I turn my gaze toward the monitors. Lung capacity: thirty-one percent of human average. The number matters less than the widening crack in the thigh stake—and less than the stake in his chest, angled a finger’s width clear of his heart. One hard push would end this. It would also end the only specimen who has ever answered a question. “You mentioned others like you.” I deliberately redirect the conversation away from the failing restraint. “How many?”

“More than you’ve documented... less than what used to be.” Muscles flex under blackened flesh at the base of his throat. “We don’t gather. We have boundaries... sharing issues.” He blinks slowly. Like he’s performing for an audience. “But we exchange what we know when it benefits us.”

Wood splinters where the stake connects to the wire cage binding his right wrist. An oily black liquid pools in the cracks, hastening the healing process. His wrist turns within the loosening restraint, milky skin sealing over the blackened knuckles. “This interview has been... informative.” I rise and back toward the restraint panel beside the door, keeping my eyes on the table. “Thank you for your cooperation.”

“The pleasure is mine,” the subject answers, that awful smile stretching wider. “It’s been... nourishing. This conversation. You listening. You’re afraid, yes. I can tell... underneath your self-possession.” Echo-Seven curls his neck muscles tighter, lifting his head another inch off the table. “Did you know fear changes your blood? Cortisol. Adrenaline. Your heart accelerates, your breathing shallows, and your skin gives you away.” His one good eye remains fixed on me. “I could smell it before you admitted it to yourself.”

I enter the twelve-digit lockdown code. Steel bands should deploy automatically from the examination table’s frame, but nothing happens. The indicator beside the silent alarm has gone dark. My warning never left the room. The wall display reads thirty-nine degrees.

“Waiting for backup?” he asks quietly. “Those systems lost power seventeen minutes ago—right on schedule. Small failures are easy to arrange when everyone is watching the prisoner and no one is watching the service tunnels.”

“You’ve disabled the secondary restraint system.” The door is at my back. I don’t turn around to test it.

“Not me,” he amends. “You never asked what followed your transport team. Something else I discovered while scouting: every containment unit depends on the same emergency grid.” The burned head cranes toward the door. “How are the others handling the outage?”

The heart rate monitor shows eighty-seven BPM now, fully within the human range and still climbing. Charring on his extremities solidifies into that glossy-black look over sixty percent of exposed areas. I reach for the facility-wide alarm control—a measure of last resort that triggers immediate evacuation and isolation protocols throughout the complex. My fingers find the switch. Then the subject speaks again, and I wait to hear the rest.

“Reconnaissance was only part of it.” His voice drops to a whisper that somehow carries perfectly across the room. “I needed to be here. Inside. Where the others are kept.” His clouded eye gleams with terrible purpose. “They’re awake now. Listening. Waiting for the moment when—”

Somewhere above us, the last active panel light dies. In the sudden dimness, the wooden restraint holding the subject’s right arm snaps with a clean, crisp sound that seems to ricochet off the walls of Cold Room 6 like a gunshot. The arm rises, and blackened fingers curl as though they finally remember how. The smile on the subject’s burned face broadens. “Shall we begin?”

 

 
 
 

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