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The Hollow That Hunts

Writer: Nik Gomez
Nik Gomez
2 days ago
24 min read

The conference room carried the scent of burnt coffee and carpet cleaner. One of the fluorescent tubes overhead flickered, the light dipping every so often before it caught itself again. Sheriff David Mercer had tuned it out by his second cup.

Evidence bags ran down the far end of the table in a straight line. A bike helmet with a cracked visor clip. A water bottle plastered with band stickers. A handlebar light, its switch still pushed to on, its battery long dead. A GoPro in a bag of its own, dried mud packed into the seams of the housing. Ordinary things. Mercer had built a career on ordinary things.

Deputy Hall sat beside him and angled the laptop so they could both see. “Kyle’s,” he said, nodding at the GoPro. “Search team found it off the trail, maybe a mile in. Card’s intact. Bunch of files from that evening.”

“Start with the first.”

Hall clicked, and the image jumped to life, bright and wide, the edges bowed like the world had been bent around a fishbowl. Route 9. Gravel shoulder. Late sun pouring gold across a field of dead grass. The timestamp in the corner read 7:09 PM.

“—and we are live,” a boy’s voice said, too close to the mic. “Day one of the Ashfall Hollow expedition.”

The camera swung around. Kyle’s face filled half the frame, grinning, hair blown flat. Mercer knew that face from the school photo now taped to every gas station door in the county. Kyle was riding out front, holding the camera back over his shoulder. Behind him the road ran back to two more bikes: Brianna close on his wheel, laughing, riding no-hands for a second before she grabbed the grips again, and Mason at the back, head down, pedaling steady. Three kids, riding toward the trees because it was the fastest way home.

“Say hi to the fans, Mason,” Kyle said.

“Get that out of my face.”

Brianna laughed, clear enough to hear over the wind.

Mercer studied it the way he’d studied countless hours of dash cam and doorbell footage. They were heading east onto the Hollow trail at an easy pace, and not once did any of them look back. No fourth bicycle, no vehicle on the county road, no adults. No fight, no accident. Nothing to write a report about.

The pines came up around them, trunks on both sides of the trail now, the low sun behind the riders breaking into long orange bars across the dirt. Kyle kept the camera on the other two, doing a nature-documentary voice.

“Nothing,” Hall said.

“Back it up. Ten seconds.”

Hall dragged the slider, and the kids rode backward out of the trees, then in again.

“There. Stop.”

The frame froze. Mercer leaned in. Behind Brianna, behind Mason, far back among the pines they’d just ridden past, something stood in the tree line. A shape, upright, darker than the shadows around it. Tall.

Mercer measured it against the trunks because that was what his brain did with things it didn’t understand. The lowest branches on those pines started ten, maybe twelve feet up. The shape’s head, if it was a head, sat above them.

“That’s a snag,” Hall said. “Dead tree. Light’s doing something.”

Mercer tapped the arrow key. One frame forward. The tree line was empty. He tapped back. The shape. Forward. Nothing.

It wasn’t following them. It wasn’t moving at all. It was there for one frame out of thirty a second, and then it wasn’t. Neither kid turned around. Kyle kept talking.

Hall pushed his chair back a few inches. He rubbed his mouth with the flat of his hand and didn’t seem to know he was doing it. “These cameras drop frames,” he said. “Compression glitch. Something in the sensor.”

“Could be.”

“You don’t think so.”

Mercer hit play. Kyle swung the camera forward, and the trail ran ahead into the pines. The light was going copper. Kyle’s narration trailed off into humming, then into nothing, and for a while there was only the tick of a chain and the crunch of tires.

Mercer watched the edges of the frame. Twenty seconds. Twenty-five. Thirty.

The scream went up right against the microphone, loud enough to clip. High and raw and long, longer than a scream should go.

Then the file ended. No fade, no final frame, just the media player’s black window and a small gray triangle waiting to be pressed again.

The silence afterward was wrong. Too clean. As if someone had cut the sound out of the room along with the video. Overhead, the fluorescent tube stuttered.

Hall was looking at him. Waiting. Mercer knew what he wanted. He wanted the sheriff to say animal, or prank, or we’ll send it to the state lab. Any word that put the thing on that screen into a drawer where it belonged.

Mercer looked at the evidence bags: the helmet, the water bottle, the dead light. He’d worked drownings, hunting accidents, a man who walked into a January storm on purpose. Every one of them terrible, and every one of them fit somewhere. He’d always known which form to fill out.

He didn’t know which form this was.

He lifted his coffee. It had gone cold an hour ago. He held it a moment, then set it down without drinking and slid it away from him.

“Play the next one.”

The shortcut was Mason’s idea, so the Hollow was Mason’s problem.

That was how he figured it, anyway. The long way home ran out along Route 9, three miles of gravel shoulder and pickups that didn’t slow down. The Hollow trail cut straight through. Twenty minutes, tops. They’d drop Brianna at her driveway before the streetlights came on.

Kyle had his GoPro out before they even reached the turnoff. He’d gotten it for his birthday and hadn’t put it down since.

“—and we are live. Day one of the Ashfall Hollow expedition.” He twisted around on the seat, one hand on the bars, the camera held out behind him. “Say hi to the fans, Mason.”

“Get that out of my face.”

Brianna laughed. She rode no-hands for a second, just to show she could, then grabbed the grips when her front wheel wobbled. “What’s the Hollow?”

She’d moved here in June. She still said soda instead of pop and didn’t know which gas station had the good slushies.

“Nothing,” Mason said.

“Everything,” Kyle said, at the same time.

Every kid in town had a version. Someone’s cousin went in after dark and came out a week later remembering none of it. Someone’s uncle heard his dead dog barking in there. Someone’s cousin’s friend went in and didn’t come out at all, and his parents moved away, and nobody talked about it after. None of the stories ever came with a last name.

Mason had heard all of them by fourth grade. Believed them by fifth. By eighth he’d figured out the stories hung around because people liked telling them, same as don’t swim for thirty minutes after lunch.

“It’s just woods,” he told Brianna. “Kyle’s scared of woods.”

“Kyle is not scared of woods.” Kyle turned the camera on himself. “Kyle is scared of nothing.”

The sun sat low behind them, fat and orange. Their shadows ran out ahead across the dirt, three skinny riders twenty feet long, all pointing the same direction: into the trees. Mason followed them in.

It took a minute to notice. Maybe two. The crickets went first. Out along the road the ditches had been loud with them, that dry end-of-summer ratcheting that filled every gap in the air. Now there was only the tick of his chain and the crunch of tires on packed dirt.

He listened for birds. This was the hour they should be everywhere, fussing in the branches, settling in. Nothing. Pines, he told himself. Pines were quiet. Everybody knew that.

Up ahead, Kyle was still narrating for the camera. Mason could see Kyle’s mouth working, could see Brianna turn her head to answer, but their voices reached him small, farther off than they were. He pedaled harder to close the gap. The voices didn’t get much louder.

Kyle’s narration thinned, then stopped. He turned the camera to face the trail and rode without saying anything, which Kyle never did.

A breath of cold moved across Mason’s arms. He looked up, expecting to see the treetops sway, but they didn’t. The air touched his skin, raised the hair on his forearms, slid down the back of his collar. Forty feet up, the high branches hung dead still. Not a needle moving.

Kyle broke first. Of course he did. He threw a grin back at them over his shoulder, then faced front, the GoPro still pointed down the trail, sucked in a huge breath, and screamed.

A full horror-movie scream. High and ragged and long, the kind he used to let loose in the middle school hallway to make people jump. Brianna flinched so hard her bike swerved.

The scream went into the trees and didn’t come back. It should have. The trail had dropped into a shallow run between two slopes, a spot that threw your voice back at you. Mason had heard kids holler down here from the road before. Their voices bounced.

This one just stopped. Like something had closed a hand around it.

Kyle lowered the camera, frowned at the little screen, and thumbed the button. “Stupid thing quit on me.” He laughed. It came out a beat late.

Nobody laughed with him. Kyle clamped the GoPro onto its handlebar mount, clicked it back on, and switched on his bike light, though it wasn’t dark yet. Not quite.

When they’d crossed the tree line, the sun had still been hitting the upper trunks, gold on the bark. Now the gold was gone. The gray under the trees had thickened and gone blue at the edges. Mason checked the sky through the gaps in the canopy. Still pale up there. Still daytime. Down here it was nearly night, and sunset didn’t work that fast. He’d watched a hundred of them from the roof of his dad’s shed.

He should say something. He didn’t.

What would he say? The bugs stopped? Kyle would make it the story of the year. Mason heard the Hollow and went full baby. And Brianna would look at him, and see it on his face, and she’d be scared. Really scared. Over what? Quiet woods? A camera with a bad battery?

And turning back meant the whole way out again, then three miles of Route 9 in the actual dark. Ahead was home. Ahead was faster. So he kept pedaling.

He stopped watching the dirt in front of his tire and watched the trees instead, the spaces between them, the gaps where the trunks stood a little farther apart and the dark went back a little deeper. He didn’t know what he was looking for. Nothing moved in the gaps. Nothing stood in them. No branch cracked. Only trees, standing where trees stood.

But the longer he looked, the more the spaces between them felt kept. Like someone was holding the stillness in place.

Brianna had stopped talking. Mason wasn’t sure when. She rode with her shoulders up by her ears, the way people ride in the rain, and she didn’t look back.

Somewhere in the last quarter mile, the thing in Mason’s chest had changed shape. It had started as maybe. Maybe it’s weird in here. Maybe we should’ve taken Route 9. The kind of worry you could argue with. He wasn’t arguing anymore.

He had no proof. Not one thing he could point at. But he knew, the way you know a stair is missing a half-second before your foot comes down. Something was wrong in the Hollow.

He twisted in the saddle and looked back the way they’d come. The trail ran straight behind them. The mouth of the Hollow should have been right there, a bright notch between the trunks. Evening light. Route 9. The way out.

There were only trees.

The last of the orange went out while Brianna was looking at it. One second it was there, a thin stripe along the tops of the pines. Then it wasn’t, and the Hollow was dark.

She dug her phone out of her hoodie pocket one-handed, thumbed the flashlight on, and pinned it against the handlebar grip. The beam threw a narrow white cone down the trail. Dirt. Roots. Needles. Past the end of it, nothing. The dark out there didn’t look like dark so much as a wall, and it seemed to lean in on the light from both sides.

Kyle’s bike light bobbed ahead of her, a small yellow circle. Mason rode behind. She could hear his chain and not much else. Her breath showed in the beam, little white puffs. It had been seventy degrees at lunch.

Nobody had said anything in a while. At first she’d been glad. She liked Mason and Kyle, liked that they’d let her tag along since June, but they talked in a shorthand she was still learning. Nicknames for teachers. Whose brother did what. The quiet had been a break from pretending she understood all of it.

Now the quiet felt different. The woods weren’t resting. It was more like a door had been shut.

“Brianna.”

She squeezed the brakes so hard her back tire skidded. Her mother’s voice. Out in the trees, to the right, down the slope, somewhere past the light.

Mason nearly hit her. He swerved, put a foot down. “Whoa. You okay?”

Kyle circled back. “What?”

She stared into the dark on her right. The phone light didn’t reach: trunks, then black. “Did you guys hear that?”

“Hear what?”

“Someone—” She stopped.

Someone called my name. In my mom’s voice. From the woods. Miles from anywhere.

Her mom was at home. At the kitchen table with her laptop and her reading glasses and a cup of tea she’d forget to drink.

Brianna looked at her phone. The last text was still there from 5:52: “Home before dark please. Love you.” No bars now. Just a little x where the signal should be.

“Nothing,” she said. “Thought I heard something. Probably an owl.”

“Ooh,” Kyle said. “The owls of Ashfall Hollow.”

“Shut up.”

Mason was watching her. He didn’t say anything. His face was hard to read at the edge of the light.

She pushed off, and the boys fell in again, Kyle ahead, Mason behind.

An owl. Fine. An owl, or a deer, or her own brain filling in a sound it wanted to hear. She’d read about that. People lost in the woods heard voices all the time. Their names. Music. It was a documented thing.

She was not going to be the new girl who made everybody turn around because the woods were spooky. She’d already been the new girl who didn’t know what the Hollow was. That was enough for one night.

She counted pedal strokes. Twenty. Thirty. Her heart started to come down.

“Brianna.”

Closer. Left side this time, not down the slope. Level with the trail, thirty feet into the trees, maybe less.

She didn’t stop. Her legs kept going on their own. But her whole body went tight, and her hands went cold on the grips.

It was her mom’s voice. It was. The recognition hit before any thought could get in front of it. Every nerve in her said turn, go, that’s Mom.

But it was wrong. The pitch was flat. Her mom said her name with a lift in the middle, a little up-and-down she’d been doing since Brianna was a baby. This had all the sounds in the right order and none of the music. Like someone reading the word off a card. And the timing was off, a hitch between the syllables. Not much. Just enough.

Her phone light flickered. Off. On. One blink.

The boys didn’t slow down. Kyle’s light kept bobbing, and Mason’s chain kept ticking behind her. They hadn’t heard it. She knew they hadn’t. Kyle would have said something. Kyle never let a chance go by. Only her.

She turned her head slowly, without deciding to, and angled the handlebars a few degrees so the phone light swept left, across the trunks, into the trees where the voice had come from.

Bark. Bark. Bark. Gray pine, gray pine. And at the far end of the beam, where the white went thin and the dark began, something stood between two trunks. A shadow. Only a shadow. Tall, and she couldn’t find an edge to it.

As her light turned, it turned too. A half-second behind her.

Not away from the light. With it. As if it had watched her move and then done the same thing. As if it were practicing.

Brianna didn’t scream. Something in her went very quiet instead. Everything narrowed. Her breath went small and shallow and careful. She was gripping so hard her knuckles ached.

She brought the light back to the trail carefully, the way you turn away from a dog you don’t want to run from. Dirt. Roots. Kyle’s back tire. She didn’t look left again.

It was not an owl. It was not her brain. It was out there, and it was using her mom’s voice, and it had wanted her to come to it.

She glanced back over her shoulder. Mason was right there, a dark shape behind his handlebars, close enough that she could see his breath.

“You good?” he said.

She could tell him. She should. Mason would listen. He might even believe her.

But if she said it out loud, it would be true for all three of them. Kyle would stop joking. Mason would get that look. And they would still be exactly where they were, in the dark, with no way to go but forward.

“Just cold,” she said. “Can we go faster?”

Mason looked at her a second too long. “Yeah,” he said. “We can go faster.”

They rode hard after that. Brianna had asked, and Mason hadn’t argued. Hadn’t asked why, either. He’d seen her face when she swung that light into the trees.

Then the dark was total, and Kyle’s light died. One second it was a yellow circle bouncing on the trail. The next it was gone, pinched out.

Kyle braked. “What the—” He smacked the housing. Clicked the switch. Clicked it again. “I charged this. I literally charged this last night.”

“Keep moving,” Mason said.

“I can’t see.”

“Stay on Bri’s light.”

Brianna had stopped a few yards ahead. Her phone beam pointed back at them, white, shaking a little.

Not at them. Past them. Above Mason’s shoulder.

“Bri?” Her mouth was open. The light didn’t move. “Bri, what—”

“Don’t turn around.” Barely a breath. “Mason. Don’t.”

He didn’t. Beside him, Kyle had gone still, one hand on the dead light. He wasn’t looking back either.

The cold came across the back of Mason’s neck. Slow. The way it had at the tree line. Only this time it didn’t move on. It stayed, like breath on glass.

Brianna’s light dropped to the dirt at Mason’s feet, as if she couldn’t hold it on that spot anymore. That was when he saw the fog.

It came from the sides. Not up off the ground the way it rose over the creek in October, lying flat, lifting slow. It poured. Out from between the trunks on both sides of the trail, low and thick, rolling across the dirt from left and right at once and meeting in the middle.

There was no wind. He’d have felt wind. The air on his face was dead calm and cold as a basement. It moved anyway.

“Guys,” Brianna said.

The fog was at their ankles. Their knees. It climbed the spokes. Brianna’s light hit it and stopped, turning it into a glowing white wall a few feet from her hand.

Mason fumbled his own phone out and got the flashlight on. It made things worse. Now there were two white walls.

“Go,” he said. “Bri, go, ride. We’re right behind you.”

She went. Her light swung forward, bobbed, and shrank into the white. For a moment he could see it glowing through the fog, a smear. Then he couldn’t.

Brianna screamed, one sharp sound somewhere close ahead. Then it cut off, as cleanly as Kyle’s light.

“Bri!”

Mason dropped his bike. He heard it hit the dirt somewhere below him and didn’t look. He took two running steps into the fog, arms out. “Brianna! Brianna!”

Kyle was yelling too, behind him. “Bri! Where are you? Bri!”

The fog swallowed all of it. Their voices went out and nothing came back. No echo. No answer. No crunch of her shoes, no wheel ticking. Nothing.

Every time Mason yelled, he heard how loud he was, how easy he’d be to find. He yelled anyway.

He dropped to a crouch and swept the phone light low across the ground, looking for anything. Her tire tracks. Her bike on its side. Her phone, still lit, lying in the dirt with the beam pointed at nothing. That was how it went in movies. Somebody vanished and left the flashlight behind.

There was no light. No bike. The dirt under the fog was damp and smooth and gave him nothing. She’d been right there. Twenty feet. Less.

He stood and turned. He couldn’t see the trail anymore. He couldn’t see his feet. The fog was chest-high and still rising, and the phone light in his hand made a glowing ball around his fist and did nothing else.

“Mason?”

Kyle. Behind him, or to the left. He couldn’t tell.

“Here. I’m here. Kyle, come to my voice.”

A shape came out of the white. Kyle, walking his bike, one hand on the bars. His face was a pale smudge. His mouth hung open.

Mason grabbed his arm. Grabbed hard, above the elbow, fingers sunk into the sleeve. “Don’t let go of me.”

“What happened to her? Mason, what happened to—”

“I don’t know. Don’t let go. We stay together. We find her. We stay together.”

It was the only thing he had left. He couldn’t see Brianna. Couldn’t see the trail. Couldn’t see the way out. But he had Kyle’s arm in his hand, and he could hold on to that.

“Okay,” Kyle said. “Okay. Okay.” He wasn’t joking. Mason didn’t know if he’d ever heard Kyle go this long without joking.

They moved one step at a time. Mason in front, pulling. Kyle behind, the bike ticking between them. Mason kept the phone out ahead and saw only white.

He counted steps out loud because counting was something. “Twelve. Thirteen. Fourteen.” Kyle counted with him for a while. Then he didn’t.

“Bri! Brianna!” No answer.

He looked back to check on Kyle. Kyle was right there, arm’s length. Mason could see his shape. It was a little harder to see than it had been.

He blinked and squeezed tighter. “You good?”

“Yeah.”

Something took hold of his other wrist.

The one out front. The one holding the phone. Fingers closed around it, cold and thin, and kept closing. They went all the way around and overlapped farther than fingers should.

Mason’s breath stopped. Kyle was behind him. Mason had his arm. He could hear the bike ticking back there, and Kyle breathing.

The fingers didn’t pull. They held. Pressed, here and there, as if they were learning the shape of him. Then they let go.

The phone shook in his hand. He didn’t raise it. He didn’t want to see what the light would find.

“Mason?” Kyle said. “Why’d we stop?”

“Keep walking. Don’t let go of me.”

They walked. Ten steps. Twenty. The fog didn’t thin. It turned around them, slowly, and Mason had the feeling, without knowing why, that it was keeping pace.

He looked back again. Kyle’s outline had gone soft, like a photo through a dirty window. Mason could make out a head. Shoulders. The curve of the handlebars. But the edges were running into the white.

“Kyle.”

“I’m here.”

He was holding Kyle’s arm. He was. He could feel the sleeve bunched in his fist, and the arm inside it. Couldn’t he?

He squeezed. The cloth was there. He was almost sure the cloth was there. But his fingers didn’t seem to be closing on anything solid anymore. It felt like holding a sleeve with not much inside it. Then like holding the memory of a sleeve.

“Kyle, talk to me.”

“I’m—“ He didn’t finish.

Mason turned all the way around. Kyle was a gray shape in the white. The shadow of a shape. Mason couldn’t find his face.

Nothing had grabbed him. Nothing had pulled. Kyle hadn’t yanked free. He was just going. Harder to see and harder to hold, a little at a time, like the fog was wearing him away.

“No. No, no, no—”

Mason grabbed with his other hand. Both hands now. His fingers closed on nothing.

He stood there with both fists shut in the fog, holding air.

“Kyle!” The fog took it.

He turned in a circle. White. Turned again. White. The phone light glowed around his fingers and showed him his own hand and nothing else. No sound of Kyle’s bike, or his own, wherever it had fallen. Only his breathing, too loud and too fast.

This was the thing. The one thing. Standing there with his hands out while somebody went, and nothing he could do would stop it.

He’d known something was wrong at the tree line. He’d known, and he’d kept pedaling. Then he’d sent Bri on ahead. Alone. We’re right behind you, he’d said.

“Brianna! Kyle! Kyle!” He screamed their names until his throat went raw.

Then the cold settled across the back of his neck. Slow. And stayed.

This time, nobody told him not to turn around.

Kyle didn’t remember letting go.

Mason had been holding his arm. Hard enough to hurt. Then Mason’s grip had just gotten lighter, and lighter, and Kyle had said I’m here and looked ahead and there was no Mason. Only white. He’d kept walking because stopping felt worse.

Now the trees had opened up. A clearing. He could tell by the way the fog changed, thinning, pulling back into a loose ring around him. He could see maybe fifteen feet in any direction. Dirt. Dead grass. Needles. At the edge of the fog, dark shapes stood in a circle. Trees. Probably trees.

Some of them were too thin. Some stood too straight. He couldn’t tell which.

He still had his bike. His hands wouldn’t let go of the bars. The GoPro sat in its mount, red dot blinking. He’d forgotten it was on. He almost laughed. Best footage he’d ever get, and nobody was ever going to watch it with him.

The fog turned around and around the clearing like water circling a drain. Never closer. Never gone.

“Okay,” Kyle said out loud. His voice came out small. “Okay. This is fine. This is the part where—” He didn’t know the part where what.

He’d done this a hundred times. Horror movies at Mason’s with the lights off. Ghost videos on his phone at two in the morning. He always talked. He always had the joke ready. That was the thing about Kyle. Everybody knew it. Kyle wasn’t scared of anything. His hands were shaking so hard the bell on his handlebars rattled.

“Kyle.”

Brianna. His whole body turned toward it, left, out in the fog. Her voice, clear and close.

“Bri!” He took a step. “Bri, I’m here, where are—”

“Kyle.”

Right side. He stopped. Same voice, same word, from the other side of the clearing. He looked left. Right.

“Kyle,” Brianna said, from behind him.

He spun and nearly dropped the bike. White. Shapes at the edge. Trees. Probably.

“Kyle.” “Kyle.” “Kyle.”

All three at once now. Left, right, behind. The same voice from three places in the same instant, and none of them could be Brianna, because Brianna couldn’t be in three places, because nobody could—

“Kyle, man. Over here.”

Mason. Behind him, and up.

Kyle tipped his head back. Behind and above him, the fog climbed into the dark where the treetops should be. Mason’s voice had come from up there. Twenty feet up. Thirty. Nowhere a person could stand.

“Over here,” Mason said again, from the air.

Something in Kyle came apart. It had been cracking since the tree line. Since the scream that didn’t echo. Since the camera quit, and his light died, and Bri screamed and stopped. He’d kept laying jokes over the cracks like tape. Now there was no tape left and nothing to say and nobody to say it to.

He wasn’t brave. He’d never been brave. He’d just been loud.

“What’s the Hollow?” Brianna asked, somewhere to his left.

Kyle went cold all over. He knew that. He knew exactly where he’d heard it. The county road. The last of the sun. Brianna riding no-hands, asking.

“It’s just woods,” Mason said, from the right. “Kyle’s scared of woods.”

It’s been listening. Since the tree line. Since they rode in laughing with the sun on their backs. Every word. It had been right there beside the trail the whole time, taking them.

“Stop,” Kyle whispered. “Stop it. Stop.”

“Kyle.” “Kyle.” “Kyle, man. Over here.”

He needed one. One real voice. One that was actually Mason, actually Bri, lost in this fog the same as him, calling for him the same way. If he could find that one, he could go to it. He’d drag them out. He would. But which?

Every voice sounded right. Almost right. Brianna’s sat a little flat. Mason’s came in a hair late, like a badly dubbed movie. Or maybe they didn’t. Maybe he was making that up. Maybe one of them was real and he was standing here doing nothing while she—

He tried anyway. He cupped his hands around his mouth. “Mason! Say something only you’d know! Anything, man, just—”

“Say something only you’d know,” Mason’s voice said, from up in the dark.

Perfect. Every word. Kyle’s own words, in Kyle’s own rhythm, the little crack on know where his voice had jumped. Only it was Mason saying them.

Kyle’s hands fell to his sides. Any direction could be them. Any direction could be it.

He picked left. He didn’t know why. He threw a leg over the bike and shoved off hard and pedaled blind into the fog toward Brianna’s voice.

The front wheel hit something. A root, a rock, something. The bike stopped. Kyle didn’t.

He went over the bars and hit the dirt shoulder first. The world spun. Something cracked loose from the handlebars and skittered away across the ground.

He lay there. Couldn’t breathe. Then could, in hard little gasps. Dirt against his cheek, cold. Needles in his mouth.

A few feet away, the GoPro lay on its side, red dot blinking. Still recording. The little screen on the front glowed. It showed a sideways world. Dirt climbing one edge. Fog. The gray bottoms of tree trunks, lined up like bars.

Kyle stared at the tiny screen. Something crossed it.

A long shadow. It slid across the frame from one side to the other, between the lens and the trunks. Unhurried. So long it took a full second to pass.

Kyle’s head snapped up. Nothing was there. The camera. The fog. The trunks, exactly where the screen said they were. Nothing in between.

He looked back at the screen. Empty now. Dirt, fog, trunks.

Then the sound. It came out of the fog to his right. Close. It wasn’t a voice. It wasn’t any animal he’d ever heard. Low and wet and clicking, and it went on too long, and some part at the very bottom of Kyle’s brain understood exactly what that sound was for.

He pressed himself flat against the ground. Clamped both hands over his mouth. Couldn’t stop the thin high whine leaking out from behind them.

The voices had stopped. All of them. The clearing was silent. The fog turned.

“Kyle.”

His own voice. Not in his throat, not in his mouth. His mouth was shut behind his hands.

His own voice, saying his own name, from somewhere else in the clearing.

Nothing in the conference room had changed. The fluorescent tube still stuttered. The evidence bags lay in their row: the helmet, the water bottle, the light with its switch stuck on, the GoPro with mud in its seams. The coffee sat where Mercer had pushed it. A skin had formed on top.

The window behind Hall had gone black hours ago, and the glass gave the room back to itself. Two men at a table. A laptop. A lot of plastic bags.

Mercer’s hands lay flat on the table on either side of the laptop. He didn’t remember putting them there. He didn’t move them.

He had watched every file on the card. He’d heard the girl’s scream stop. He’d heard two boys shouting her name into a screen gone solid white. He’d heard one boy, alone, and the voices that answered him.

Hall hadn’t said anything in twenty minutes. He sat with his arms folded tight across his chest like a man trying to stay warm. One file left.

“I can run it,” Hall said. “If you want to step out.”

“No.”

Mercer reached for the trackpad. His hand didn’t want to leave the table. He noticed that the way he’d notice it in a suspect, a small reluctance in the body that the face was hiding. He made the hand move anyway and opened the file.

Motion. Handlebars, dirt, fog, all smeared together. A thump. A boy’s grunt. The picture wheeled end over end, ground, white, ground, white, and slammed to a stop.

The image settled at a tilt. Dirt rose up one side of the frame. The rest was branches, black against fog, and fog, and more fog.

Breathing. Close to the mic, fast and ragged and wet. Someone lying very near the camera, trying not to make noise and failing.

A long shadow slid across the frame. Hall made a small sound in his throat.

The breathing hitched, then went muffled. Hands over a mouth.

“Kyle,” said a voice.

Kyle’s voice. Mercer had listened to that voice narrate, joke, and finally beg for the better part of an hour. He knew it now. It wasn’t coming from anywhere near the camera.

Then something entered the frame.

It came in from the top edge, from above, the way something taller than the camera’s field of view would have to. Legs first. Too long. The knees were in the wrong place, or bent the wrong way. Mercer couldn’t tell which. Every time he thought he’d fixed the joint in his mind, it seemed to have been somewhere else. It moved like something copying a person from memory.

It crouched slowly, folding down toward the lens in stages, one section at a time, until the thing that might have been a face came level with the camera.

Mercer leaned in. He couldn’t stop himself. The face would not come clear.

It wasn’t dark. The fog lit it gray-white. It wasn’t out of focus. The pine needles in the dirt beside it were sharp enough to count. The face just would not hold in the picture. It smeared. The pixels crawled across it and broke apart and gathered into something that almost stayed, eyes or the places eyes should go or nothing there at all, and then slid loose again.

It came closer. Closer than something that size should be able to get to a lens. It filled the frame.

It inhaled. One long breath. The mic caught all of it, a slow drag of air, in and in and in.

Then it spoke.

“Mason. Brianna. Kyle.”

Three names laid on top of one another in the same instant. Three voices. Mason’s. Brianna’s. Kyle’s. Perfectly together. Almost perfectly.

Its head tilted. A small movement. Curious.

“Say hi to the fans,” it said.

Kyle’s voice. Bright. Too close to the mic. Every note of it right. It wasn’t looking at the boy on the ground. The smeared place where a face should be was pointed at the lens. Into it.

At him.

Mercer slammed the laptop shut. The crack of it went through the room. Hall jumped.

Then nothing. The hum of the lights. The stutter. Mercer’s hands were on the lid. He lifted them off and laid them flat on the table again.

Hall stared at the closed laptop for a long time. “We’re not going to find them,” he said. His voice was barely there. “Are we. There’s not going to be any bodies.”

Mercer didn’t answer.

He looked at the evidence bags. The helmet. The bottle with its peeling stickers. Things a mother would sign for at the front desk and carry out to her car and not know what to do with.

He knew what he was supposed to say. We keep looking. We bring in more dogs. We widen the grid at first light. He’d said it to other deputies in other rooms and meant every word.

He didn’t say it now. Hall nodded slowly, as though he had.

Somewhere down the hall, a phone started ringing. One of the families, maybe. Or the paper. It rang and rang. Mercer didn’t get up.

He sat with both hands flat on the table under the humming light, the coffee cold at his elbow, the laptop closed in front of him. He was never going to open that file again. He knew it the way he knew his own name.

Out past the county road and the field of dead grass, Ashfall Hollow would be standing in the dark the way it always had. Quiet. Still. The trail running straight into it.

The fastest way home.

 

 
 
 

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